Bon Monde mock up

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Hi,this mock up is created for Women and Children day gown company.This web is going to serve at Middle east.Have a look and tell me what do you think.


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overall bhalo hoisey...... but amar motey aroo kichu tweaking kortey hobey

1. Bon Monde font not match with this.. and also arrow ta keno bojlam nah......... ota design akta part hoiley.. bhalo lagsey nah .
2. menu ta thek ciloo but menu pichoney floral ta match korsey nah............ small type kichu yellow box a vitor diley hoito bhalo lagbey
3. bottom a ornament ta opacity 10-15 moddey raken........ i mean akdom halka....... and footer font gola must be web font ( arial, verdana. etc rakben )
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pagol bhair shathe ami purapuri vabe akmot.
amar r kisui bolar nai.

tobe r kisu koren r na koren font ta parle change koiren.
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need breathing spaces in between pictures and site edges. keep going!
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thanks guys,....i will definitely keep ur opinion in my mind... :D
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agree with pagol solve korle it will look good...
think positive, be optimistic....
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hmm...i will take care of that
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your design idea, concept and capabilities is spreading more...... keep it up. :)
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parthasarker wrote:your design idea, concept and capabilities is spreading more...... keep it up. :)
Such comments from you (an experienced and qualified designer) is most inspiring for me.Thanks for this.

i always try to materialize my own idea for designing.like, i am now experimenting on web layout.when ever i am asked to do a mock up for client i usually do 2 layouts.
one is as per client's 100 % requirements,and another one is as per my imagination.Not all the time my imagination is accepted (as i always implement some kind of fairy and unconventional design layout), but the rate of success as a new designer a could say not depressing at all.After all i am sure i will b benefited in far future.over all i am trying to do something different,uncommon....where my innovative ideas will be getting priority.

Thanks again Partha da.

(i again mention, this is a bit risky for novice designers, but u know when u will try to set up ur style there will always be some confrontations.)
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way of your designing mock up is cool. I always do it. One, according to client's requirements and others are as per my own interest :) Not necessary that your one has to be chosen, but it helps lot in future.
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