sample design for local bulb company

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Hi ppl please comment on this design i've been working on after looooong time ..the header will be in flash which i'm still changing and changing :oops: . client has approved the overall design and waiting for flash part.


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Tashlima apa, truly speaking: individual part/module gular design bhalo hoyeche, but overall bhalo lagchena...jora-tali mone hoche.....kono moduler sathe onnotar kono mil nai...Theraper moto..hehehe..
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haahahah maybe it's bec of the bg .. that kind of segregating those individual sections .. ami header theke shuru kore , menu and all others gula chara chara rekhesi to highlight each of them .. don't know if it's harmonizing all together or not..
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nope. not harmonizing :)
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:D will do some more tweaking then
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hmm ektu tweaking kora dorker
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to be very frank ...eta apnar kaj mone hoche na...i know your level of design sense very much...most probably apni eta onek joldi jodli korechen ...sorry for the negative feedback :D
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sobbar sathe ekmot .. body part ta beshi chokhe lagse...pura concentrate ta first e oidikei jasse...
company name ta aro prominent korte paren..:)
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R aaaa mami.. Hum onek din por apnar akta kam deklam. Bangla kam nah, hoi tailay sob tek. Ja diben tai bhalo. English kam hoilay koitam, ata bhalo hoi na, ota change koren, blabla.

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shabbir bhai its ok ..onekdin por website designing e haat dile ja hoye :) and yes amar kacheo jisnish ta dal kichuri i lagtese .. i will change the bg and give it bluish theme.

pagol mama jodio bangla client, tarpor o nijer jonne design ta improve korte hobe .

Thanksssss all for your valuable comments .. :)
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:-)
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Khalamoni, apni karo kothay protarito hoien na. Eita holo Bangla site... Ekdom thik ase...
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ekta kotha...bangla site to ki hoise.....bangalider ruchi ki amra change korte parina? GP to onek korlo...shobai GP er dike takiye na thaki....nijerao kichu kori :)
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heee heee mama GP/banglalink/Aktel new kichu koray nah :D mama.. just copycat from somewhere else..... copy kortay nah nai... but atoo boro boro company a jonooo copycat kora ta kemon jani ..tai nah.. amra normal public a jonoo tek asay....

r ruchi change hoitay arooo 30/40 bocor lagbo at least......
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pagol bhai....copy to shadhinotar por thekei hoye ashtese....copy hobei....ya GP/Citycell etc er ad gula mara shtea shobai jane...janar por oo bhalo lage....coz they copied nicely.... so copy oo korte hobe as well as nijero kichu input thakte hobe...tarporei bhalo kichu ashbe....tobe last 7/8 yrs dhore manusher ruchi onek ee change hoise.....jeta chilo unexpected :)
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