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Kichhudin aage ei design ta korlam but r kichhu korar nirdesh pelam na tai ekhon etar kaaj bondho achhe... Dakhen eta kemon holo???

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sorry for my comment


*** color too light
*** menu font i don't like
*** banner picture... doesn't match with company.


*** color aroo aktoo bright koren... and menu font gola change koray dekhen... and finaly banner a kono movie related picture use koren... plus kono akta movie related object .. like RELL
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if it's just a template then it will pass but if it's really a finance related site then its too plain/simple/mellow/soft, need to be a little catchy and no movie ads, thats for sure. Hope its not too rough :)
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ummm...I liked the color theme of version1. no problem with soft colors.inconsistency in bars(sign in). you should change the footer color-something blue. ya you can change button fonts-probably verdana or "sans sarif" fonts would be fine. apatoto ei....sorry for the comments :P
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Thanks Shahriar, Pagol and Asif vai. Thanks for the comments/compliments heh heh heh. I'm little busy now but i'll correct all the mistakes i've done in here and submit this again... Hope i'll do better with u'r help... Thanks again...
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Dear Chhagol bhai ..Im sure you have done this design within a very short time..you could have made this more professional if you had time :-) anyway let me give you some quick feedback on your design :-)


1. version 1 is better than version 2
2. overall color seems very dull.
3. Navigation bar is not floats with your design theme. You can try your logo colors in the navigation.
4. Also you can try "Tahoma, Arial or Verdana" font instead of your existing font style.
5. In the bottom part, there should be a "COPYRIGHT" statement.
6. Sign in panel looks very flat.

Sorry for the negative comments :-) Hope your next version will be more professional and attractive.

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Ore babare. Amare fataiya falaise shobai. R jiboneo ami kono design joma dimu na... heh heh heh... Just kidding...


Assa, light colorer khetre ekta jinish ami lokkho rakhi r sheta holo ami always light color use kori jeno viewer der karo chokhe eta irritation shristi na korte pare. Beshi dark color dile majhe majhe manusher birokto lage beshikhon dekhte. Jaak, color ta change kore dibo. R font er bapere ami khubi dull. Font choosing er khetre ami khubi pocha. Kon font ta valo r konta kharap ami bujhi na. "sign in" r "sign up" button gulo change korte hobe bojha jasse cause keu eta pochhondo korchhe na. 2-3 ghontar kaaj khub valo howa uchit na ashole, heh heh heh...

Shobai k onek onek dhonnobad... Ami ei line a new to tai onek vul truti hoy. But apnader majhe kichhudin thakle shob thik hoye jabe inshallah. Ami onno ekta kaaje ektu busy achhi. Kaaj ta sesh hole ami V3 niye apnader shamne hajir hobo... Abaro shobai k onek onek dhonnobad...
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This post should be in Critique Center....:).....ashole chhagol bhai....problem kothay hochche ami halka dhorte perechi mone hoy.....apnar logor color gula jotota prominent sei onujai site er theme ta match korenai...er jonnoi may be shobar kache ektu dull mone hochche......better use logo colors......sorry for "kata ghaye nuner chita" :P
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Ki etto boro kotha? Amar kata ghaye nuner chhita diyechhish tui? Toke ami aaj suicide khawaiya attohotta korabo. Bol shoytan tui kothay thakish? Aaj theke 30 bochhor aage tui amake thu thu diyechhili. 25 bochhor aage chimti diyechhili. 20 bochhor aage guta diyechhili. R aaj shei tui amar kata ghaye nuner chhita dili? Thash thash, thush thush... dead... (shomapto)
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Mama ra, ei same design take arektu modify korlam... Color jodio ektu beshi use korsi but eibar r shei light light vaab ta nai... heh heh heh... Eikhane ki ki somossa ase ektu bolen...



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ya bright hoise.....but overall amar bhalo lagenai....er cheye ager gula light holeo onek bhalo lagche including logo and colors...:)
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