Business Card For Myself

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Kowsar Ahmed
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hi........friends................ dint hav work, so tried to make business card for myself. can u select for me 1.... suggestions are welcomed plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Saad
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i like no. 2 and it also need chage for make better

1. parle font change koiren. size should be formal.

2. mobile fon r chithir kham akdom posondo hoy nai.

3. space rakhar chesta koren (typography mone hosse).

4. ata ki typer background, ata ki apner favorate? backgroud ata posondo korar karon ki, parle janaien. (i m talkin about last layer)
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I liked 3rd one most. Retro effect ta bhalo hoyeche. Font style tao bhalo. BUT font use korar shomoy shob shomoy ee kheyal rakhte hobe confusing kina.. ei font type er onek letter ee confusing. ei gula must kheyal korte hobe...email ee "k" seems "b" -> "bowsarahmed@gmail.com". "4" seems "h" in mobile mobile number. so be careful in choosing font, specially hand written fonts.

mobile/email icon ta na dileo kono problem nai. ar dileo eirokom colorful na...you can use "Multiply" or "Lumniosity" from layer options.

I would prefer "Freelancer" or "Free for freelance" than "Free for Job".

overall bhalo kaj hoyeche. bhaloi lagbe print hole.

2nd one ta motamuti legeche...kichu jinish eto halka korechen je bujhai problem. overall text and background mishe nai, jeta sample 3 te shundor bhabe hoyeche.

I liked that you are seeking to do new things. keep it up.
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cool........... I like the number 2....... need some changes also.... but design is cool.........
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asif bhai ja bolecen er por r kisu bolar nei! keep going...
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Kowsar vai sobai dhaki 2 number ta apnaka nita boltasa ... tahola 3 numberta amaka dia dan amar o card dorker ... (Y)
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Kowsar Bhai...

1st one – so many elements why? Phone number & email add.. pink colour why?
2nd one – is soso but icon is not good
3rd one – is good…need some changes

Please don't mind overall good try keep posting :roll:
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like 2 but temon ekta valo lage nai... kisu jinish change koraa dorkar..
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Kowsar, I have found one which is similar to your 1st sample. Compare why people didn't like your 1st sample. Most of the colors you used are not live.

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ya thats cool
this thread is going to vary handy
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at last i have selected no 3...................sorry tariq bhai..........apna k dite parlam na.
friends i have change as u said...............need any changes before printing..............if needed any change,let me know as soon as possible.........as i will give to print within a short time.
thank you. comments plz...........
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shob ee to bhalo legeche...but mobile icon ta 2 ta number er majhkhane bhalo lagchena....better to change it.
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz i need suggestions from u all before i give this to print. plz plz i want help frm u..................

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DD te ki sudu Asif Bhai active member. naki amar post e r kew comments korar permission nai.
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