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shamoon
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its a website for an alternative energy company. they wanted a out of box website design don't care about file size. the only thing they wanted is to show the eco-friendly environment with different buildings like industries, hospitals, schools, homes etc.

here are two variations of the design, the second one is selected by the client.

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comments and suggestions are welcome :)


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liked the 1st one..............footer portion is good..................
may be u need to change the font colour in the middle portion. it is hard to read......u can try with some anti color.
this is just my suggestion..............good work
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thank you Kowsar for your suggestion. much appreciated.
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both are cool. great job Shamoon bro :D
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every thing if perfect except menu. menu is too many word. (R)
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overall 1st i like but.. as bappy said menu too many word.. yea i agree with him.. but yea i know also sometime client want it... so no way... so try to make that nicer.... and one more thing i like header much but.. to me in header some object like house, medical those are not match with that header.. yea industrial building match nicely and more thing body text need more readable.. like u can make more black.. that's it... :)


enjoy..

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shamoon
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thank you amit and bappy for your comments and suggestions

pagol bhai thanks for the detailed suggestion, I know that the menu has a lot of words but the client wanted the site in Czech language and the alot of wordings in the menu is the result of the same :) even though i managed to reduce some navigation buttons and added it in the footer as a text. only the main sectors of their business is present in the menu.

and you pointed it right, I am also not totally happy with the perspective of some of the buildings, i will work on it more to blend all things together more evenly.
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very nice designs. I liked both. Since the 2nd one is selected, I tried to mark some issues that I felt to be modified. hope you will not mind. cheers!

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Cool design bro...... I liked the color very much...... as well as layout (Y)
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@asif bhai: thanks for the detailed elaboration, it was very useful. i did fix it before sending to the client :) thanks a heap

@ranabrt: thanks man :)
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