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muradrm
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hi,
i have just designed these samples for a client ( of a real estate )

Please give some suggestions or let me know what you think.

Tried to keep the colour scheme blue and red following the colour of logo.

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i like last one... ami print a kam bhalo boji nah..
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here have some sample for your.. may be it will help u bit..

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I will comment on this by tonight
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Amar kase prothom duita valo lagse... patern ta ektu vinno...
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to all: please try to find out the problems if any and state that. Designs or arts are placed in Critique Center to get critiques. so please try to emphasize on negative issues. If you think that everything is fine then you can say: "I didn't find any problem" :D
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like the last one most..:) .. personally for business card i like very simple and smart theme and color must be blue/gray/white and orange ... beshi rong chong like kori na :(

and aisob building er chobi na diye real estate er Icon type kisu dile amar mone hoi aro valo lagbe..
http://www.istockphoto.com/ check this for icon .. :)
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http://www.distortedesigners.com/forum/ ... f=34&t=905 check here more sample for you.. may be bit helpfull for u..
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hi muradrm

4 of them are so so...not so attractive. Sorry for the negative comment :).
To me it seems like ready made templates. In their logo they have some pretty colors. You have already used their color theme but I don't think its 100% perfect combination. I don't know how you can improve :-) but there is something missing... :)
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agree with shabbir bhai - all the cards are missing the eye catching element. The last one's differentiation between the card owner's name and the company details is good but the color scheme n design is not that attractive.
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http://www.flickr.com/groups/bizcard/pool

check out these cards
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thanks to everyone for all the suggestions , will try to improve the cards. lets see what the client thinks, as i have already sent them.
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muradrm wrote:thanks to everyone for all the suggestions , will try to improve the cards. lets see what the client thinks, as i have already sent them.
better to post here before send client if you got time. otherwise its ok. we will discuss whether client choose it or not :)
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Murad, I tried to find out few problems which you can consider as Critiques. Your layouts are cool. so just go through the comments. Hope these will help you :)

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smasif wrote:Murad, I tried to find out few problems which you can consider as Critiques. Your layouts are cool. so just go through the comments. Hope these will help you :)

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hey , asif bhai, thanks. will try to fix the error u have shown in the designs. much appreciated. :D
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