Mockup 4play Sports Bar

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I want to know your valuable comments/critics on the layout

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1st layout ta bhalo lagsey but background ta bhalo lagey nai.. i mean match korey nai... apni background sara korley aroo bhalo lagbey hoitoo..only 4play background a aktu glow or galaxy type effect diley hoito bhalo lagtey parey...... i'm not sure.. just check ok...
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definitely 1st one. and agree with pagol. you can also try blue background instead of gray one.
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1st one is nice but agree with pagol ... (Y)
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Honestly, i dont like 1st one at all.agree with Pagla Mama

i would prefer 2nd one, but footer nai....plz give it a try redesigning footer.

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amar 2tai motamuti lagchhey
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Bappy bhai,

I liked the 2nd one and I would like to talk about it. I have few points.

* It's a nice design. I liked it. Well done, pretty detail and good color combination
* I don't like the PLAY fill color. Need experiment for this one.
* You could align the 4play logo with the text and headings at the main content.
* I think the header will look more attractive and clean if u just put the man playing golf and any one of them. It looks very scattered now!
* I think the text headings are too large. U could make it smaller and make it bold with color.
* I will suggest little more line spacing.
* You could align the image slide with left and right text.
* There may be need some work on footer as others mentioned.

Otherwise I think it's a great layout.
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I like the 2nd.. this is much organized......
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thanks every one for the comments
finally they like the Second one
development process is going on. i will get back to you very soon....
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coooooll.... carry on...and update us...
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congrats.. :)
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