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First few drafts which client has shortlisted. Client is more inclined to #1 and #3. Let me know your feedback and how these can be improved.
Brief- TROFIMA is Greek word which means food / food products. This company will process or belnd organic/raw food such as tea leaves. So full name of the company is - Trofima Refreshments.
I haven’t decided the colour yet. These are just few sketches which have been shortlisted. Thanks in advance.
Loved all these versions. I'll vote for #3... Is it possible to remove the Refreshment part? And letter 'r' is a little bit unreadable as it's a new word to me.
Last edited by Shad on Mon May 11, 2020 2:31 pm, edited 1 time in total.
I wanted to keep the Refreshment word as this is their part of the brand name. I know removing it may make the logo more cleaner. also placement is not well thought. I will talk to the client.
I am also agree with the "r" thing. In my second round I will look into it.
I'm obsessed with number 3 now!
It will help company to establish the brand easily with iconic text branding. And overall visual composition is lovable! And I believe, it'll look outstanding with the real life mockups!
I'm obsessed with number 3 now!
It will help company to establish the brand easily with iconic text branding. And overall visual composition is lovable! And I believe, it'll look outstanding with the real life mockups!
Thanks Shad.
My next step is to move to Illustrator and play around with colours. Haven't got feedback from client yet. Hopefully they'll go with #3.
Nurul Amin Russel
Dhaka, BD
